Steps brisk and breaths quick,
The snow whispers soothingly,
Thoughts swirl like flakes.
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- kloppski
- Catharsis: A technique used to relieve tension and anxiety by bringing repressed material to consciousness. (The American Heritage Dictionary, Second College Edition) Writing as therapy, as a way of processing thoughts and doubts and fears. Nothing more.
I tried to comment on this a couple of days ago, but forgot my blog info, so had to wait.
ReplyDeleteI like the juxtaposition of snow falling and thoughts swirling, really nice. If I were to suggest anything, it would be to leave off, "like flakes," in the last line. Flakes already established by the fact it's snowing. Thanks for sharing this with me, hope you don't mind the critique.
Gary/ soji