tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4201908545626393927.post8894514187557487843..comments2023-09-20T03:55:28.130-04:00Comments on brainfissures: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4201908545626393927.post-8024312745153756152008-11-22T12:50:00.000-05:002008-11-22T12:50:00.000-05:00Thanks Amy; my folks loved it, which made it even ...Thanks Amy; my folks loved it, which made it even more special for me. I enjoyed writing it!kloppskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01454187173561939015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4201908545626393927.post-55264239054652470622008-11-22T10:26:00.000-05:002008-11-22T10:26:00.000-05:00This is the one I like. I especially like the sou...This is the one I like. I especially like the sounds in the first stanza. The sound imagery of the blue jay reminding her "of the stillness would soon be" is striking. Also, I like the first line, "The call of the blue jay does it for her"...very poetic!A.E. Baynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04700055696097294939noreply@blogger.com